tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post8727798960744332692..comments2023-05-04T07:26:18.914-04:00Comments on BLESSED IS SHE: Kissing bloghop!-- (Anyone who read my scene from Friday should read this-- follows right after that)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-57811128056788890672012-02-21T17:08:24.170-05:002012-02-21T17:08:24.170-05:00You won my fourteen page critique with this awesom...You won my fourteen page critique with this awesome kissing scene! Feel free to send your pages any time to me at hoperoberson at hotmail dot com :) Can't wait to hear more of this story!!Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-55800021691462813732012-02-16T14:33:23.398-05:002012-02-16T14:33:23.398-05:00Wow...that was a powerful kiss. I'm so sad for...Wow...that was a powerful kiss. I'm so sad for Gabe.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444784814793987285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-27535481851504785172012-02-16T13:48:40.786-05:002012-02-16T13:48:40.786-05:00That left me very curious about those two!That left me very curious about those two!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-16423748916513292242012-02-16T07:18:53.213-05:002012-02-16T07:18:53.213-05:00Whoa. That was incredible.Whoa. That was incredible.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-76690278108701971222012-02-15T22:02:41.610-05:002012-02-15T22:02:41.610-05:00Great scene! But man, she's gone...nevertheles...Great scene! But man, she's gone...nevertheless, a pretty emotionally intense scene!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-67519532628737654382012-02-15T14:12:56.263-05:002012-02-15T14:12:56.263-05:00That is so sad! Sacrifice is so selfless, but at t...That is so sad! Sacrifice is so selfless, but at the same time, I want them together. great job!Jennie Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331827076858223497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-58959229895050022052012-02-15T01:01:52.261-05:002012-02-15T01:01:52.261-05:00I am very intrigued!! What a powerful, mysterious ...I am very intrigued!! What a powerful, mysterious kiss! I really enjoyed your writing style, I felt like I was right there watching the scene...and I want more!Elhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15802843532640086060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-2650440865617948602012-02-14T21:57:19.016-05:002012-02-14T21:57:19.016-05:00Whoa, super intense kiss of life/death. Damn. Poor...Whoa, super intense kiss of life/death. Damn. Poor guy finally gets the girl of his dreams and she dies saving his life. I hope she is some sort of pheonix that can rise from the ashes for another hot kiss!Shell Flowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08127004188099765270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-50827649137624102342012-02-14T20:48:40.089-05:002012-02-14T20:48:40.089-05:00What an intense scene. Her sacrifice, wow, so powe...What an intense scene. Her sacrifice, wow, so powerful. I wasn't expecting that. Well done, Amber!LynNerdKelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04167392990015741278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-62917233871222009582012-02-14T19:58:42.516-05:002012-02-14T19:58:42.516-05:00Wow! That must be some kiss.... Poor guy.Wow! That must be some kiss.... Poor guy.Kate Larkindalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-10727745883619311582012-02-14T16:35:30.996-05:002012-02-14T16:35:30.996-05:005 hops in 8 days? You've been busy!
Nice exce...5 hops in 8 days? You've been busy!<br /><br />Nice excerpt! Good to meet you. :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-4359707554470486102012-02-14T15:58:22.845-05:002012-02-14T15:58:22.845-05:00Oh my! I have chills! That last line, oh so perfec...Oh my! I have chills! That last line, oh so perfect! This sounds like an amazing story, I want to read more! Happy Valentine's day :)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-76322264010643200152012-02-14T15:49:57.070-05:002012-02-14T15:49:57.070-05:00Dang! that's harsh!Dang! that's harsh!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-18751842140403017202012-02-14T14:43:33.051-05:002012-02-14T14:43:33.051-05:00Now THAT is one powerful kiss! Thanks for sharing...Now THAT is one powerful kiss! Thanks for sharing. I'm a new follower via the bloghop!Nancy Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-16250387395375328962012-02-14T14:25:22.597-05:002012-02-14T14:25:22.597-05:00Ack! Sad :( So sad. She should come back and make...Ack! Sad :( So sad. She should come back and make out with him more.Cassie Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17706774393186819619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-74030695934250264122012-02-14T14:07:57.120-05:002012-02-14T14:07:57.120-05:00Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments! I hav...Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments! I have been so busy lately that I have fallen behind on my cp duties. So as soon as I get caught up on my over-due critiquing- I will be around to all of your scenes. Can't wait to see what everyone has written :)Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00368485571268832781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-90347528747934569442012-02-14T12:44:37.452-05:002012-02-14T12:44:37.452-05:00Powerful stuff! Thanks for sharing.Powerful stuff! Thanks for sharing.Emily R. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03892444969625637064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-55519231647450820452012-02-14T12:28:38.077-05:002012-02-14T12:28:38.077-05:00Wow, that is a very intense kiss! Great scene!Wow, that is a very intense kiss! Great scene!Krista McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09230770035490273428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-63832855732651223012012-02-14T12:25:41.206-05:002012-02-14T12:25:41.206-05:00Ooo... seems intense ;) I loved the "Her lips...Ooo... seems intense ;) I loved the "Her lips felt like cream" Niiiice. ;DMorganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15747144518868320969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-74573801128056614642012-02-14T12:01:39.535-05:002012-02-14T12:01:39.535-05:00What a beautifully painted and intense kissing sce...What a beautifully painted and intense kissing scene. I like it!Susan Oloierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07311938400999953443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-60419218131641758592012-02-14T08:56:42.163-05:002012-02-14T08:56:42.163-05:00Holy crap. Wow. Poor Gabe! Very well written.Holy crap. Wow. Poor Gabe! Very well written.Kelley Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06373650788799372118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-9098506095564639462012-02-14T08:10:56.572-05:002012-02-14T08:10:56.572-05:00haha, yes Gabe is devastated! He never fully recov...haha, yes Gabe is devastated! He never fully recovers from this- even though it saves his life.Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00368485571268832781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5198004210032806701.post-90207484761379925552012-02-14T08:06:06.498-05:002012-02-14T08:06:06.498-05:00Wow, that is one powerful kiss! Nothing a guy love...Wow, that is one powerful kiss! Nothing a guy loves more than for the girl he kisses to burst into a million tiny-orbs of gold light. :DStinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com