Dialogue Introduction "I'm hearing voices bloghop'

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Today: Dialogue Introduction: Have two characters introduce each other using only dialogue--no backstory, no internalization, just dialogue between the two. Max 250 words. --Here it is, and since I couldn't use internilization, I color coated the conversation so nobody got confused. Red- is Steve, a seventeen year old, laid back, surfer kinda boy. And purple is Kid- who many of you met Monday, is a rude boy with jersey-slang.

            “Dude, there’s somebody I want you to meet.”

            “Man, don’t you know I gots’ betta things—ohh… well, heya good lookin’.”

            “You’ll have to excuse him Amber. They don’t have manners on his planet. We call him Kid, seeing as how he’ll never mature past puberty.”

            “Yeah, whateva’. They call me Kid cause they aint intelligent enough to pronounce my name in its native tongue.”

            “And because you look like a ten year old boy. My name’s Steve. I’m the local mind reader.”

            “Yeah, more like the local big mouth. This punk here thinks he can blab ‘bout anyone’s thoughts.”

            “Like you’re any better. Don’t think I don’t know when you’re spying on everyone. You see Amber, Kid can blend with his background, making him impossible to see. It’s great when we’re hunting, but not much use for it when we’re just chillin’ in the cave.”

            “I can fight too.”

            “Haha, yeah I’ll give you that. This little four-foot nothing is like a squirrel on crack. It’s hilarious to see Gabe try and get him. Where’s Gabe by the way? Anyways, you’ll meet him later. He’s this goofy giant who is always scrappin’ with Kid. Bahaha, it’s so funny to see Kid, who’s a third of Gabe’s size, with Gabe pinned to the ground having to tap out. You’d think ‘ole hot-hands would learn his lesson. But I’d be lying if I said I never rooted for Gabe. Bahaha”

            “Hell, I see where your loyalties are.”


And that's Steve and Kid. Hope you enjoyed, now it's time for me to hop along and check out everyone else's posts :)